Caligula's Launderette

Hmm...Brad...differently style showing from the others of yours I've read recently, which is not bad, just different, which is good, okay stopping there, and continuing on... I agree with Xan ...

Lovely description Jack, you've got my attention. Besides, Pegasus is much too an impatient ship to sit in a convoy. What do we say?” “That she likes to spread her ...

I've almost read through the gamut of his plays or atleast the ones in my Works of Shakespeare edition. My favorites would have to be Macbeth, Taming of the Shrew, ...

The postal workers know you by name, And the seat-stealers at church cringe at the sight of you. - stylistically something feels off about this line maybe break it into ...

Sorry Arvy dear it took me so long to get this up. Here's your crit. :lots_hearts: 1. spell check, silloethe should be silhouete . 2. In the first paragraph you ...

hahah...this reminded me of a english assignment I had as a sophmore back in the ol' high school. Had to write a chaucer inspired piece. If you didn't know already ...

Wow, hon. This is epic. I am going to have to do a proper crit on it, to give you any kind of useful feedback. Should have it to you ...

This I think deserves a proper crit, so I'll have that to you at latest by Sunday/Monday depending on time difference for I'll be in France. At first look, I ...

Chanson you're back! YAY! I missed you. So anyways...this is some really nice work. So I'm going to do a proper critique on it. Should have it to you by ...

The first line made me think Frost. after that a mix of Wordsworth, Frost, and Coleridge. What beautiful imagery you have in such a compacted poem. My favorite part was ...

wow...thats some really good stuff hon, I wish I could hear it sung though. I did find one typo though on line 7 - I believe odn't should be don't ...

hahhah...I got a right laugh out of that Snoink, pure brillance...well and the fact that it reminded me of the time when one of my best friends shot herself in ...

I just have to stop and revel in this as a gamer....ooooooo.....ahhhhh....ooooo...exploding things....fire makes me happy.... wow, Griff you put a lot of work into this, I definetly don't have ...

I love you Jack... Bernard Cornwall is my hero. But on Pratchett...I have Lord and Ladies and Soul Magic and Color of Magic, I thought most of them wer humerous, ...

that was amazing hon...wow. bravo, kudos and all that jazz. for a title the only thing I could come up with was 'androgyny', hmm...concertchick's 'tunnel love' could also work. hope ...